My descriptive essay - Exam

My first experience with manga

Outline
Paragraph 1

1. Introduction
2. First time
3. First impression

Paragraph 2

1. Place I read my manga
2. Getting in the reading adventure
3. Surrounding enviroment

Paragraph 3

1. Describing what the book was about
2. Main ideas
3. Characters

Paragraph 4

1. Cartoon release
2. Getting more mangas
3. Fanatism

Paragraph 5

1. Conclusion
2. Restared details

*my essay is missing ^^; I´ll submit next hour....